Can you describe this mountain setting?
Remember to use adjectives, connectives and openers as well as checking you punctuation.
Remember to use adjectives, connectives and openers as well as checking you punctuation.
Sarah
25/11/2014 10:24:56 pm
Lovely painting!
Tyler
25/11/2014 10:25:52 pm
that would be a great voow
emily
25/11/2014 10:26:12 pm
it is beautiful , pretty and there's a lot of fantastic mountains there
Ty
25/11/2014 10:26:24 pm
WOW that's a amazing mountain I like the beautiful trees and the sky is nice to
Daisy
25/11/2014 10:26:40 pm
WOW that looks amazing and beautiful I wish I could go there.
benjamin
25/11/2014 10:26:54 pm
COOL Mrs brown I like it a lot
Joshua
25/11/2014 10:30:37 pm
It looks cold ,beautiful and tall
Ty
25/11/2014 10:30:46 pm
The mountain looks beautiful and its a nice view
Adam
25/11/2014 10:31:16 pm
So many mountains so much snow they is so many it all blends togever
cerys
25/11/2014 10:31:51 pm
The mountains are ragged and very tall .
shannon
25/11/2014 10:35:24 pm
In the back round there are mountains.
Finley
25/11/2014 10:36:52 pm
Its a beautiful view and I wish I could live there
Mrs Brown
25/11/2014 10:37:39 pm
Please check you punctuation. I wonder who can write more than one sentence.
Daisy
25/11/2014 10:41:53 pm
The snow top mountains are reflecting of the beautiful, blue river.
Mrs Brown
25/11/2014 10:46:14 pm
An excellent descriptive sentence Daisy- can you write another?
Sarah
25/11/2014 10:42:20 pm
The Mountains are ........pretty and beautiful. I know the biggest range is the Rockies.
owen
25/11/2014 10:46:21 pm
It is nice and peaceful and there are some scary woods.
Daisy
25/11/2014 10:52:09 pm
There are spiky, green trees and will be a nice noise with the river moving .
Cole
25/11/2014 10:52:45 pm
It looks very hot and I could be there because it looks rocky; high
shannon
25/11/2014 10:55:14 pm
I like the views.
Ella
26/11/2014 08:05:02 pm
The water is sparkling and clear like a diamond. The mountains are snowy and white like milk. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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