Mountain Description

25/11/2014

Can you describe this mountain setting?
Remember to use adjectives, connectives and openers as well as checking you punctuation.

21 Comments

Sarah

26/11/2014

Lovely painting!

Tyler

26/11/2014

that would be a great voow

emily

26/11/2014

it is beautiful , pretty and there's a lot of fantastic mountains there

26/11/2014

WOW that's a amazing mountain I like the beautiful trees and the sky is nice to

Daisy

26/11/2014

WOW that looks amazing and beautiful I wish I could go there.

benjamin

26/11/2014

COOL Mrs brown I like it a lot

Joshua

26/11/2014

It looks cold ,beautiful and tall

26/11/2014

The mountain looks beautiful and its a nice view

Adam

26/11/2014

So many mountains so much snow they is so many it all blends togever

cerys

26/11/2014

The mountains are ragged and very tall .

shannon

26/11/2014

In the back round there are mountains.
In the middle ground there are trees.
In the four ground there is trees and a lake.

Finley

26/11/2014

Its a beautiful view and I wish I could live there

Mrs Brown

26/11/2014

Please check you punctuation. I wonder who can write more than one sentence.

Daisy

26/11/2014

The snow top mountains are reflecting of the beautiful, blue river.

Mrs Brown

26/11/2014

An excellent descriptive sentence Daisy- can you write another?

Sarah

26/11/2014

The Mountains are ........pretty and beautiful. I know the biggest range is the Rockies.

owen

26/11/2014

It is nice and peaceful and there are some scary woods.

Daisy

26/11/2014

There are spiky, green trees and will be a nice noise with the river moving .

Cole

26/11/2014

It looks very hot and I could be there because it looks rocky; high
and breath taking.

shannon

26/11/2014

I like the views.

Ella

27/11/2014

The water is sparkling and clear like a diamond. The mountains are snowy and white like milk.

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