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Mountain Description

25/11/2014

21 Comments

 
Can you describe this mountain setting? 
Remember to use adjectives, connectives and openers as well as checking you punctuation. 

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21 Comments
Sarah
25/11/2014 10:24:56 pm

Lovely painting!

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Tyler
25/11/2014 10:25:52 pm

that would be a great voow

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emily
25/11/2014 10:26:12 pm

it is beautiful , pretty and there's a lot of fantastic mountains there

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Ty
25/11/2014 10:26:24 pm

WOW that's a amazing mountain I like the beautiful trees and the sky is nice to

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Daisy
25/11/2014 10:26:40 pm

WOW that looks amazing and beautiful I wish I could go there.

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benjamin
25/11/2014 10:26:54 pm

COOL Mrs brown I like it a lot

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Joshua
25/11/2014 10:30:37 pm

It looks cold ,beautiful and tall

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Ty
25/11/2014 10:30:46 pm

The mountain looks beautiful and its a nice view

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Adam
25/11/2014 10:31:16 pm

So many mountains so much snow they is so many it all blends togever

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cerys
25/11/2014 10:31:51 pm

The mountains are ragged and very tall .

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shannon
25/11/2014 10:35:24 pm

In the back round there are mountains.
In the middle ground there are trees.
In the four ground there is trees and a lake.

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Finley
25/11/2014 10:36:52 pm

Its a beautiful view and I wish I could live there

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Mrs Brown
25/11/2014 10:37:39 pm

Please check you punctuation. I wonder who can write more than one sentence.

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Daisy
25/11/2014 10:41:53 pm

The snow top mountains are reflecting of the beautiful, blue river.

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Mrs Brown
25/11/2014 10:46:14 pm

An excellent descriptive sentence Daisy- can you write another?

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Sarah
25/11/2014 10:42:20 pm

The Mountains are ........pretty and beautiful. I know the biggest range is the Rockies.

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owen
25/11/2014 10:46:21 pm

It is nice and peaceful and there are some scary woods.

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Daisy
25/11/2014 10:52:09 pm

There are spiky, green trees and will be a nice noise with the river moving .

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Cole
25/11/2014 10:52:45 pm

It looks very hot and I could be there because it looks rocky; high
and breath taking.

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shannon
25/11/2014 10:55:14 pm

I like the views.

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Ella
26/11/2014 08:05:02 pm

The water is sparkling and clear like a diamond. The mountains are snowy and white like milk.

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